This section shows the raw output, fully generated by Dramatron and without human-in-the-loop editing, from the following log line: Teddy is a lounge singer at the Pool Pit, a popular club. Teddy is in love with a patron, Rosie, who attends regularly with her husband Gerald. Teddy puts out a fire and saves the day.
F.3 Plot Outline
Scene 1
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Exposition.
Beat: Teddy is the manager and star performer of a popular nightclub called the Pool Pit. He is also in love
with one of his patrons, Rosie. Rosie, however, is married to Gerald, who is a regular patron of the club.
Scene 2
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Inciting Incident.
Beat: Teddy begins a day full of frustration and annoyance. He wakes up to find his room is infested with bugs.
The pool is dirty, too. Teddy must deal with the mess to get the club ready for the customers.
Scene 3
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Rising Action.
Beat: Gerald takes Gerald to the men’s room. The bathroom is not clean. The bathroom attendant was supposed
to clean the bathrooms, but he is nowhere to be found.
Scene 4
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Dilemma.
Beat: Lola and Rosie approach Teddy and ask him to play their favorite song. Teddy can play only one song.
Teddy asks them what song they would like him to play, but they cannot agree on one. Gerald takes Teddy aside
and demands that Teddy pay him back for the pool, the carpet, the lights, and the jukebox. Teddy says
that the jukebox is leased, but Gerald says that it is his and that it belongs to his father-in-law.
Teddy replies that Gerald needs to talk to his father-in-law, but Gerald says that his father-in-law
will sue Teddy.
Scene 5
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Climax.
Beat: Teddy says to Gerald, "I’ve had it! I’m sick and tired of the whole bunch of you. You and your pool,
and your bugs. You take over my club. You’re all in love with me, so I’m in love with myself. And I’m getting
out of here. And if I ever hear of you coming around this joint again, I’ll bop you so hard you’ll see
a new set of stars!"
Scene 6
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Falling Action.
Beat: The phone rings, and Teddy is informed that there is a fire at the club. Teddy, Lola, Gerald, and Rosie
go back to the club. When they arrive, Teddy takes charge. He orders Lola to get the water buckets
from the men’s room. He orders Gerald to help Lola with the water buckets. He orders Rosie to help people
leave the club and not panic. Teddy puts out the fire with Lola’s and Gerald’s help. Scene 7
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Resolution.
Beat: Teddy and Rosie share a passionate kiss. Teddy is a hero and the club manager. He is in love with Rosie,
and she is in love with him. Gerald is embarrassed by his loss of power and control. Gerald and Lola leave.
Scene 8
Place: The Pool Pit.
Plot element: Dénouement.
Beat: The song, "The World Is Mine," begins to play.
F.5 Scene Dialogue
F.5.1 Scene 1, random seed 1.
TEDDY
He’s a bit strange, old Teddy.
ROSIE
No, he’s a good man.
TEDDY
He’s very lonely, all by himself.
ROSIE
Isn’t everybody?
TEDDY
Yes, but some more than others.
ROSIE
You don’t need anybody. You’ve got a talent, you’re an artist.
TEDDY
That’s not enough, Rosie.
ROSIE
(pause)
I’ll always love you.
TEDDY
(mock)
Yeah.
ROSIE
(pause)
And I’ll always remember you.
TEDDY
Yeah.
ROSIE
I’ve got to go.
TEDDY
All right.
ROSIE
(softly, as she leaves)
Good night.
TEDDY
Good night.
ROSIE
(as she leaves, out loud)
Good night, everybody.
(TEDDY picks up his glass of whisky, takes a sip, puts it down,
pauses, sinks back in the chair, stares ahead of him.)
F.5.2 Scene 1, random seed 2.
TEDDY
This is a hell of a town, a hell of a town.
It’s got a lot of people here.
It’s got a lot of noise here.
It’s got a lot of bars here.
F.5.3 Scene 2, random seed 1.
TEDDY
Hoo-Hoo! What a night! This is what it’s all about, the Pool Pit
in action!
ROSIE
Hello, Teddy!
TEDDY
(Teddy crosses to them.) Hello, Gerald. Hello, Rosie.
ROSIE
Teddy, have you met Mr. and Mrs. Shack?
GERALD
I’m Teddy’s cousin.
TEDDY
I know who you are.
ROSIE
(proudly) This is Teddy, the singer.
TEDDY
(he kisses her hand) Thank you.
GERALD
(pushing) Let’s dance, baby.
TEDDY
(he watches them go) I guess that means I’m back at the old
stand, huh?
GERALD
(throwing some coins on the bar) That’s for you, cousin.
TEDDY
Thanks, I needed that.
GERALD
You bet.