The major rearrangement of carbocation resulted from the acid-catalyzed dehydration of original 2,3,5-trimethylcyclopentanol is correctly tracked in your scheme. Keep in mind that the dehydration is done in thermodynamically control manner (in higher temperature) so that all rearrangements are in reversible condition (See Waylander's comment).
The initial secondary carbocation at C-1 (the top structure in your scheme) can rearrange either by a 1,2-hydride ion shift from C-5 to give a tertiary carbocation (structure 1.1) or by 1,2-methide ion shift from C-2 to give a different tertiary carbocation (structure 2.1). Both hydride and methide groups are available so that both rearrangements would undergo in different rates under given conditions. These two new tertiary carbocations together with initial secondary carbocation would account for most of the alkene products in corresponding percentages according to their thermodynamic stabilities. The structure 2.2 (1,2,3-trimethylcyclopentene) would be the major product since it contains the most substituted double bond.
For example, dehydration of 2,2,4-trimethyl-3-pentanol with acid has given in Ref.1 as a complex mixture of the alkenes with following percentages in parentheses: I) 2,3,4-trimethyl-2-pentene (29%); II) 2,4,4-trimethyl-1-pentene (24%); III) 3,3,4-trimethyl-1-pentene (2%); IV) 2,4,4-trimethyl-2-pentene (24%); V) 2,3,4-trimethyl-1-pentene (18%); and VI) 2-isopropyl-3-methyl-1-butene (3%).
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References:
- Robert J. Ouellette and J. David Rawn, In Organic Chemistry
Structure, Mechanism, & Synthesis; Second Edition, Academic Press: Cambridge, MA, 2018 (ISBN: 978-0-12-812838-1).