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5It's an unusually (and unnecessarily) contorted construction.– Edwin AshworthCommented May 3, 2016 at 9:08
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@Ed So what can normal level non-eng-natives can do about this?– Ankur PatelCommented May 3, 2016 at 9:12
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3I'm a 60-year-plus well educated native speaker, and I'd not even read such high-flown prose unless I were forced to. If this is compulsory reading, show this comment to your supervisor.– Edwin AshworthCommented May 3, 2016 at 9:17
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@Ed I wish if I could and Well to get into great Graduate business school one need to criss-cross through such gloomy passages– Ankur PatelCommented May 3, 2016 at 9:26
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I think it's just a good lesson that being a native speaker of a language does not necessarily make one a good writer of that language.– thumbtackthiefCommented May 3, 2016 at 16:44
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