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The first section of this article does not explain what the State Security Council is (or was) |
The first section of this article does not explain what the State Security Council is (or was) its function is. I suggest someone knowledgeable about this topic rewrite . [[User:JosiahRFoster|JosiahRFoster]] ([[User talk:JosiahRFoster|talk]]) 10:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC) |
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Apartheid Regime
- Isn't this non neutral POV? BoonDock (talk) 14:03, 25 December 2014 (UTC)
- Of course it is. Changed it seeing as there was no other comment BoonDock (talk) 11:46, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
Article improved
Have improved the article. More information to follow in the next few days as I flesh out its role in the PW Botha and de Klerk years. Will add more detail to how the NSMS worked and try to detail the organization structure which evolved over times with its maze of line, staff and matrix style of authority. Surprised it worked.Conlinp (talk) 06:46, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the work on this. Hope you don't mind my interference. Also, I got an edit conflict, so I overwrote your edit and then re-did it afterwards.. BoonDock (talk) 11:47, 29 December 2014 (UTC)
- Further information concerning the NSMS and its Joint Management Centres. More info to follow about the SSC structure.Conlinp (talk) 09:00, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
- Added further information about the SSC itself. More to follow.Conlinp (talk) 08:21, 12 January 2015 (UTC)
- Further information concerning the NSMS and its Joint Management Centres. More info to follow about the SSC structure.Conlinp (talk) 09:00, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
First section needs to be rewritten
The first section of this article does not explain what the State Security Council is (or was), only its ostensible function. The first sentence in particular is problematic (what was it? by whom was it founded?). I suggest that someone knowledgeable about this topic rewrite the first section. JosiahRFoster (talk) 10:41, 8 July 2024 (UTC)